An Open Thank You Letter to Stephen King
December 3, 2011
Dear Mr. King,
It feels strange to be writing you a thank you note. I’ve never considered myself a fan of yours. Ironically, I married a fan who, as of the mid-80s owned every one of your books in hardcover, some of them in two different languages. He tried and tried to get me to read your books, and I dug in my heels. I didn’t like horror. I’m squeamish that way.
I still don’t, if I’m honest. And I know you’ve written things that aren’t considered horror. My husband convinced me to read The Eyes of the Dragon at one point, since I do like fantasy, but I didn’t like it. I’m stubborn that way, and it was probably my own prejudice talking.
Recently, however, I acquired a copy of On Writing. I know, I’m late to the party, but I wanted to thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this book.
I’m not even done reading it yet. I put it down in the middle of a section to write this. I was going to email you personally, but I see on your website, that you don’t give that out. That’s OK. I hope, at some point, this post reaches you somehow, perhaps, through the magic of Google alerts.
The section where I set the book aside was the one on that jackhammer, the plot. I’ve always considered myself an inveterate pantser, but as I’ve worked my way toward publication, I’ve taken classes and workshops, read craft books and listened to other writers. If you poke about my website just a bit (not that you would, because you probably don’t have a lot of time for it), you might notice I’ve recently signed a publishing contract for a historical romance novel. It’s actually a two-book deal, and I’ve been struggling with the second book.
Part of that struggle is the pressure of knowing this second book has to come up to scratch and me being worried that manuscript I sold was a fluke. Book two, you see, was nothing more than a kernel of an idea, a situation if you will, that I pitched to my editor over the phone when we were talking about a possible deal on the first book.
So as I’ve struggled with this book having to be right, I’ve wondered and worried about the plot. Am I doing it right? Am I going to have those turning points exactly where I need them? Am I going to have the proper through lines? The right structure?
And then I read that section in your book about plot being a jackhammer and breaking at least as much as it helps in extracting that fossil of a story.
How liberating.
I wrote that first manuscript not worried about any of those things. And I sold it. I need to get back to that mindset, and I need to get back to the joy.
So thank you for that reminder, from the bottom of my heart.
Thank you for writing this book.
Sincerely,
Ashlyn Macnamara










I’m searching for a “like” button…=)
As much as Facebook aggravates me, I am forever looking for “like” buttons where none exist. You know SK could probably turn FB into a great horror story, and I’d be tempted to read it.
I read this book a while ago, but you have me wanting to read it again. I think you are so right in that we have to get out of our own way. Fear is a funny thing. I think we have a fear of failure, but also fear of success.
How do you get over that? I’m not sure, but I think it is something along the lines of looking the fear straight in the eye, saying screw you, and writing the next page anyways.
I know I fear success, even if I’ve already achieved a measure of it. And yeah, I have to get past it. Ironic that it’s the author of Cujo, Misery and The Shining who helped me, eh?
I, too, need to re-read his excellent book. My current wip has been having severe plot problems. Thanks, Ashlyn, for reminding me that there is help available. Good luck with book 2. I’m sure it will be wonderful!
I join you in thanking Mr. King for this book. It helped me a lot the first time I read it and I’m sure it will help even more on the second go round. And I will also thank Mr. King for his works of fiction. I’ve read just about all of them and enjoyed every word!
I really need to give his books another try. I think I’ve grown tougher in my old age. And the new one looks really good.
Thanks for the encouragement, and good luck with your WIP.
I own this book, but have never read it. I know I should… and yet there it sits in my ever-growing TBR pile.
Oh, read it. You will not regret it. Among its other virtues, it’s one of the most readable craft books I’ve ever seen.